Sunday, December 19, 2010

Rip

I wanna buy a gun
I wanna kill someone
Who, you ask, and I have no reply
Because it's you I wish would die.
Not really, no, not completely true
This loathing isn't just for you
It's for that other guy in my life
Who didn't know how to treat his wife.


Everything little thing he said to her,
Everything little thing he did for her,
Achieved only one thing,
She began to hate everything about his being.
He talked and talked and talked 
And she just wished he'd walk
Away from her, and never return
To her, and their children.


Slowly he murdered her very soul,
She felt parts of her heart break from the whole,
Over the years she lost the ability,
To see situations and their solutions clearly.
His ridicule and mindless complications,
Had tormented her mind, fraction by fraction,

And now, here she was, hardly alive.
A human unable to function or survive.


"Help!" she says, and reaches out,
"Someone save me, get me out!"


"Oh, please!" I say, "It's your own mess,
You brought this upon yourself.
Agreed, your guy is quite the dick,
But, only because you allowed him to pick.
Grow a pair, woman, ask for what you desire!
Don't moan when your man takes out his ire,
On the gutless thrash-able commodity,
You've let yourself be." 


It'll be tough to get out of this web that's been made,
But, woman, just go for it, rip off the band-aid."

21 comments:

  1. Yeah, the first stanza creeped me out, because it was our facebook chat. This is amazing shit. you came up with it in such a short time?!

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  2. You never know how reality turns into awesomeness = )
    Yeah, I believe I took 10 minutes to compose this. or maybe 15.
    Amazing shit? THANKS :)

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  3. WHERE IS MY COMMENT?
    OMG.
    Okay I'll try this again.
    Why are you such an amazing poet? No, really.

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  4. I don't know where it is, Dishari = O
    And I don't seem to be getting notifications for comments anymore which just BLOWS.
    Anyway, well, I think I'm such an amazing poet because I always thought I was, and told myself I could be.
    Or just, thanks = )

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  5. FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEL! This is too good.

    Your Math skills and poetry skills are completely opposite :P

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  6. WOW thanks = D
    And STFU Sarthak.
    Integration > Maths.
    Thus, ME FTW!

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  7. shrutika. this. is. absolutely. amazing.

    'nuff said.

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  8. of course it's enough said = P
    thanks ma shawtie : D

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  9. Awesome, loved it!
    And it rhymes, yaaay! :)

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  10. Thanks : )
    And yes, my poetry usually does, though I try to change that sometimes : )

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  11. oye hoye badiya !
    sargun

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  12. why aren't you being able to sign in as Sargun? anyway, thanks =)

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  13. You always tend to, question the reader, don't you?

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  14. I do? Well, thank you. Even though I do sense the feeling of a lot of sarcasm here, I tend to rather acknowledge compliments I get from others.
    But, on another note, it's simply 'cause I haven't read several of your entries. This is probably just the fourth or fifth that I have. So, yes, sorry about me questioning certain things rather late.

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  15. I wasn't being sarcastic which is why it's now been proven beyond doubt that you're daft. This is awesome.

    Also, the grammar in your last comment is atrocious.

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  16. Hahahh. Wow. You are a writer. A true, English...freak? Can I say?

    Honestly, I can't be bothered to do anything with English. It gets on my nerves. Only if it weren't the only fluent language I knew! Sadly, the only language I can write in.

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  17. I'm not sure you can, hombre.
    Who the fuck are you?
    Why do you insist on maintaining your anonymity?

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  18. Why does it even matter who I am?
    Will it change anything?
    I doubt it.

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  19. I'm sure you do as well. In a different way, of course. ;)

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