Friday, August 13, 2010

Forsake

This is a song, by the way.


How hard can it be
To love me baby
Probably not that much
‘Cause you did (maybe)
At least that’s what you said,
Or was it just in my head?

I believed you, because I loved you
I believed you, because I needed to,
But lookie, here I am,
And who knew, without you,

I won’t forsake what we had,
Cause unlike you, it makes me sad,
That it’s no more.

Now stop telling lies,
Of what you do
Stop trying to hide,
The rotten truth,
‘Cause nothing that you say
Can cease my tears.
Unless it’s something like,
“Come back to me,”
I don’t like reality,
At least not if it makes you,
Want to stay so far.

I won’t forsake what we had,
Cause unlike you, it makes me sad,
That it’s no more,
And though some time has passed
My love, my love, for you still lasts,
Just like before.

I’ve been spending way too long.
Looking for good in my life,
Or crying over the bad
That I caused in my life,
But now its over,
And this is what I call Closure.

I just realised now,
That there might be a day,
When I don’t need to see you,
Just so I can be okay,
A possibility,
it might just happen, to me,

Yet, I won’t forsake what we had,
Cause unlike you, it makes me sad,
That it’s no more,
And though some time has passed
My love, my love, for you still lasts,
Just like before.

15 comments:

  1. You posted something about a break up and deleted it. Can't blame my curiosity now , now can you?!

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  2. Merely a technical goof up.
    It'll be back up soon.
    Tell me what you think about it, then.

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  3. Very rythimic yo. rap along. sing along and good lyrics. *mai god

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  4. thanks, yo, i've written a couple more, i'll put them up soon : )

    analytical and all, sargun.

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  5. Do you have a tune to it? Or simply just lyrics?

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  6. Alright. Well, it's pretty good. A good tune could probably make it better though. Help it feel, more like a song, than just a bunch of words.

    Just my words of advice.

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  7. There's something about it that I'm dying to tell you, but I'm not cause you're commenting anonymously. Change that, and it'll help us both.

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  8. If only I could. It'll help us both if I stay anonymous for a while. You could always tell me this by email though, if you're up to that, and if it's extremely necessary. Tell me if you're up to that, and I shall send you a link with my email address.

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  9. No it won't help us if you maintain your anonymity. It will just restrict conversation, which is something, I must say, I'm dying to have.

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  10. It'd rather have it restricted. But, why would you want to have a restricted conversation. That's quite intriguing.

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  11. I'm dying to have conversation, not restricted conversation.

    I live to intrigue.

    Lol tell me who the fuck you are.

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  12. Nah. It's good. I'm simply not going to comment anymore.

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  13. No don't stop, keep commenting.
    Your comments are awesome.

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  14. I read this after a while again, the meaning's still the same, my interpretation though, I feel has changed.

    With your writing, with any writing to be honest, people try relating it to their own life, and thus creating meaning to it, their own interpretation.

    It's good reading some of your old writings, they're different, slightly less emotional to an extent than the new ones.

    Anonymous.

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